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Hello Sunshine, I'm here to review as requested. :) I really liked this poem, because it was funny and simple. The dialect just adds to the whole, and makes it ...

Hello Yuriiko, I'm here as requested. :) Boy, it’s a bad realization that sleeping on the world’s famous clock can cause backaches and dried flakes on the corners of your ...

Hello Skins, I'm here as requested. :) There's a lot of reviews already, and I'll be honest and say that I don't really want to read them all. ;) I'll ...

Hello there. :) I remembered that I took AP courses for the same reason I dated Elizabeth: why not? Don't switch the verb tenses. She loved me back. The story ...

Hello Jas, I'm here as requested! :) There's already a lot of review here... So I'll try not to repeat what others already said, but I'm sorry if I do. ...

Hello there. :) "If you expect me to give you the whole account of it, William… then you're wrong! I've already told you too much. I promised not to meddle ...

Hello Truth. :) Yes, this chapter was rather boring, but I'm sure you'll have some more exciting coming soon. ;) Transitional chapters are always good to make us understand the ...

Hello Dudette. :) They were mumbling something about it taking ages and I had to agree with them. If it was up to me, I’d have left ages ago. You ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) First off, I want to say that your format discouraged me a lot. It's a huge line, and you have two or three ...

Hello there. :) Amanda thought of the nights she cried her eyes out, screaming his name into her pillow, wanting him to tell her it was OK, that he was ...

Hello there. :) I haven't read all of your novel, but I'm still going to try to review this for you today... Since I think you deserve a review. :) ...

Hello there. :) First off, it's a good poem. I like the feelings you've put in there. I only found two mistakes and they were already pointed out by another ...

Hello there, it's me again! :) Let's begin with nitpicks. Mikayla, Thomas, Tammy, and Zeke stepped into the silky twilight from underneath a canopy of their favorite restaurant , The ...

Hello there. :) I'm here as requested! I'll try to do all of your works, but it might take me some time... I just recently got a job, and I'm ...

Hello there. :) This story was really great, and I love how you get 'out' of the letter at the end to show us that she is getting rid of ...