thelastofhisclan

Thanks,I'll work on this

Thanks all, Though that line "He don't follow me" was forced, the grammar I used was used on purpose, but looking back I see that it didn't portray what I ...

Yea I had that opinion too. I'm trying to redo some of the comparisons and the tree was definitely a turn off to me. When I first wrote it i ...

Dialogue Dialogue Dialogue Dialogue I don't know anything about writing stories haven't done it, but from reading other's works I find that dialogue is a great attention getter. Helps with ...

Thanks, I'm kind of new to this site and sites in general... I will definitely space between lines. I didn't think of that. Your comment was greatly appreciated :)