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Re: Citadel (revised)
thank you so much buddy :D I really appreciate it... it was inspired by feelings as I read through old journal entries and as I had been reflecting how fragile ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
thanks for the review! could you explain where the dialogue needed to be broken up into a different paragraph? I kept it in the same paragraph if it was the ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
hey and congrats on your work Nightmare!
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
nah, I was debating making her name Mae or Fae, and I took a poll and Fae won. xD I do enjoy faeries, though. Thanks for the review!
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
#onlyanightafterigotsomepeaceandquiet
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Boy, Delaney: Prologue
thanks! #ifinishedtheprologue :DD
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: "The Ones Crafted by You"
no prob gurl X)
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Werething - Chapter 2
yeah, that makes sense. I get it.
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
quite.
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
hahaha XD (do you think YWS should get rid of these creepy smiley faces and replace them with normal ones?)
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
thank you so much :)
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
thanks so much!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
wow, thank you! as my first poem on YWS, this is very encouraging :)
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel (revised)
thank you very much! I do think revising this and re-publishing was a good idea, since the original definitely lacked in the first two stanzas. thanks again!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Citadel
(did that send twice?) xD thanks for the review!
Oct 4, 2014