theironnovelist

yeah, this chapter really makes more sense in the long-run. Drie's character is confusing at first, but will resolve over time. The forest has been described in the others chapters, ...

yeah. a lot of it will make sense later, especially Drie's willing to escort them. It's a secret.

aha! sounds good

hmm. thanks for the review. I shall take some of these things into consideration. I haven't read this in forever xD i'm working on 3 or 4 works right now...not ...

yes, this could be seen as someone going through that sort of change in their life, much like Susan in The Chronicles of Narnia :). I, myself, see this in ...

thank you very much! do you think this is the poem I should use? I am honestly still conflicted

study hall tomorrow.

alright...that might be easier. xD

ok! but i will try to make an effort to make that more understandable :)

ahh, I see your point...but what do you mean by using sensory images? like, how would I express that? nice signature btw

thank you; I appreciate is soo much!!

thank you much!! :D

:D thanks so much, jazzy! for clarification, that second line kinda means "or the thunder above your head as the roar of savage dragons". like, comparing thunder to a dragon's ...

(oh and I see now in your description the lowercase was intended) :)

sounds like quite the interesting assignment...