thehobbitgangster

This poem had a dark sort of humor to it and made me sad a little when thinking about the poor little grandmother alone on Christmas. The whole part of ...

I have to agree that it is great to read a poem on here that is not entirely serious and moody, but I believe this poem does have a certain ...

This sounds like it's going to be a good story! My issues with it are how short some of the sentences are right in a row. It feels sort of ...

This was a really cool idea to write about and you did a very nice job with it. The only thing I had trouble with was following with what was ...

This was a pretty good poem. The only problems I saw with it were a few punctuation problems. For example the whole future, present, and past line. I don't know ...

That was really amazing for a twelve year old! I really must give you props for that! I really like this piece because I can picture everything so vividly. I ...

Wow, what an introduction!!! This story sounds really suspenseful and I can't wait to read more!! My one critique is the amount of writing that is dedicated to Kailyn's outfit ...

These were great comparisons of showing the different sides of people's beliefs. It seems like sometimes inside of one person both beliefs are present. (maybe that's why the poems were ...