thegirlwhofateloves

*bows* *then falls over*

mmm hmmm....because not breathing, of course, makes you strong! :wink:

:shock: *big puppy dog eyes*................................................................................................???????????????????

*tuts* it's a saying..... ok then just short!!!!!! :D No but seriously I do like it lol

I really liked this too. I loved the way it start with "and" - no capital letter or anything....and I like thinks that break the 'rules' lol :thumb:

It was ok....but for such a topic I think it needed to be better. x

I loved it. It wasn't really your standard kind of poem, which was cool.

Cute.

Short and sweet....

Beautiful. Liked it a lot. :thumb:

It was good....but it didn't touch me in anyway. I may have to re-read it lol.

At least you're comfy.....

Have the white coats arrived yet??!!!! :lol:

Theblackrose - I'm sure that's exactly the same thing that you wrote twice, just in a different way lol :D Anyone else? Or is it so dreadful it doesn't deserve ...

It sound so patronising, and I totally don't mean it to, but for a 13 year old I think that's quite good, and like Snoink said, you've got time to ...