thegirlwhofateloves

It's fantastic. It's not despicable! But maybe that's because I understand where you're coming from lol. It's hard, yes, but that's because some things have to be. And just because ...

:lol: that's really quite amusing. Have to admit, not sure on the beginning, but as you go on it's actually quite good. As long as you're being ironic which I'll ...

Like it. Needs a bit of tweaking maybe, but I like the innocence. BUT to make the so-called innocence more effective, I think you need to make the overall poem ...

What I got from this poem wasn't anything that made sense. But not in a bad way. I think I see where you're coming from, in that beauty can be ...

I think that that's pretty damn good actually. You don't always have to adhere to the rules of punctuation to create something like a poem. It's not necessary unless it's ...