thegilbygirl

hai. This is a really good poem, that's really touching. I think, however you may dissagree, that you could put in some full stops, just to break up the poem ...

Hiya, First of all, really nice poem. However, and maybe this was a deliberate decision, I'm not particularly fond of the format. I think maybe you could start a new ...

Hiya gummiebaerrs, Firstly, I think this is a good poem, with lots of nice ideas. However, I have a few things I would change, but these are all just my ...