thefireinmeisJC

Hey Kakali, here's your review as requested. She stretched upwards a hit her head roughly on the roof of the short hut. "...and hit her head." The had been in ...

Ok first off, is this the whole story? It seems like a short story though I just want to be sure. I can't really give a good review on this ...

Ok this is interesting...I don't know what it is about but its interesting. Secrets have been passed Will I come out last? Ok, first of all from reading this, I ...

Ooooh. this was very good! It reminds me of the song "Set Me Free" by Casting Crowns...its about how we are bound by chains and Jesus sets us free (Its ...

Awww this is cute. I got this picture of a small child skipping across the clouds...like an angel with flowing garments though made out of water. though when i clicked ...

Hey! haha i'm terribly biased in this review because I'm not going to say anything bad about a Christian poem lol not like there is anything bad to say... but ...

oooooh this was really good! I disagree with the God part :wink: but other than that I liked it. The past two and half hours I have been sitting in ...

oooooh I LOVE IT!!! Good first attempt, 10 times better than mine (see: From Here) :D I'm surprised no one has commented before me. anyway, the only thing that I ...

Welcome to YWS!! It's very good though you fill up on descriptions too much. I didn't really read it all...though I can tell from skimming that it sounds interesting...I would ...

This was cute actually. I agree with Pandy, it makes a circle (or cycle). There's a book I know that does some of that... Anyway, I think there are some ...

Ha, I just typed up a nice litle review for you but then instead of minimizing, I clicked exit. Deleting all of my hard work. But that's ok. I shall ...

HI! Welcome to YWS! Since I see this is your first post, don't forget to post a 'ello on the Welcome forum under Community Forums (its the first one). That ...

THIS IS AWESOME! so awesome that I used all caps... :P I've read some of your other stuff and I had to laugh at the "congrats for not having so ...

*unglues eyes from screen* This was really really really good though really really really confusing. Who's Mike? Who is Cam talking to in the italics?? Is one part a flashback ...

Wow. This was great! I haven't read the other ones though. I saw that it was in second person, correct? And I became interested... I like how I could seriously ...