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Re: Panic Attack Part One
Hey Mikayla! I love your writing style and the opening sentence was really good and really grabbed the reader and wanted me to read more. I also liked the chatter ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: Detached.
Hello nowave! I really like your use of dialogue in the story. Your writing style was good but I think that it could use some work. The story felt a ...
Oct 7, 2015 -
Re: Sylvie
Hi! I really like the mystery and the writing style but I think you made a typo when you said Men made downhill Also I felt like some parts of ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: Stillborn
Hi! I really like your story! Some parts did confuse me though. At this part when you said, I remember how we sat in the hospital waiting room, all of ...
Oct 5, 2015