thanatosdeath

Heh, I really liked this. All about the twist and turns of life. Up and down, forward and back...*Sigh*...This was well written and I don't think I got puntual error, ...

Sorry, I forgot to read the note above, so I posted before I read it... :shock: Silly me, alright, lining needs work...But it does add drama...It's actually quite good now ...

Yay! More negativity for me to fee on! Erm, not that that's a bad thing...*sweat drop*...I loved the message you sent out...A big thing I got out of this was ...

I'm definitly agreeing with the others...Move it...Heh, sorry I'm comin' on to strong aren't I?...But it's most interesting...I liked it...A lot... :D Death

I must say...This was...Interesting...How to put this...Definitly needs work, but in all do time it shall blossom...Spelling errors, punctuation...The plots good...We should work together...I think I

Rawr. Dang I wish yhou were in my poetry nice...The mistakes I caught were already posted by the others so I won't bother...But Pm me some time...I thnk we'd be ...

Oooooh. Very good. I like that kind of...I don't know sad kind of tone to it...But hey, I'm goth, I'm like that! Anyways, I don't think I saw ay spelling ...