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thanataphobic

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: (v.) to clear of impurity

    I'm in love with this.

    Fri May 26, 2017 8:44 am
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: spectrophobia

    I honestly don't care if there are grammatical errors or if things don't make sense, because this story is one of the most beautiful things I've ever had the pleasure ...

    Sun Feb 05, 2017 10:16 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it! I'll edit that line and fix the typo immediately. I hope you have a good ...

    Mon Jan 30, 2017 5:20 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    ah, thank you for taking the time to write such a useful review! I'll definitely keep the thing about my descriptions in mind for the next story I write.

    Mon Jan 30, 2017 5:17 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    I'm also glad you gave it a chance! Thank you for your kind words and I hope you have a good day (:

    Fri Jan 27, 2017 7:51 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    awww thank you so much!

    Thu Jan 26, 2017 10:48 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Cress (short story)

    this is was so good! I really wish it didn't end so soon, though ):

    Wed Jan 25, 2017 10:13 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    thank you so much for your review!

    Wed Jan 25, 2017 9:54 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    why thank you, good sir!

    Wed Jan 25, 2017 1:09 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    HAHA THANK YOUU! I guess I should work on some smoother thought transitions!

    Wed Jan 25, 2017 1:08 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thanks so much! means a lot (:

    Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:47 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thanks so much for the helpful review! I don't think I'll edit anything into the piece as of now, but I'll definitely remember those pointers for next time. Have a ...

    Sat Jan 07, 2017 11:17 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix those straight away. And as for the seventh house thing, it's actually a reference to the boy's birthday. A bit random and ...

    Sat Jan 07, 2017 10:06 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Losing Yesterday

    This is beautiful.

    Fri Jan 06, 2017 7:47 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: s t a t i c

    ah, thanks for pointing out that wording issue, I'll fix it right away. And as for the coin analogy, you're close! I didn't realise how vague it sounded until now, ...

    Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:07 am


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