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thanataphobic

thanataphobic

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: (v.) to clear of impurity

    I'm in love with this.

    May 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: spectrophobia

    I honestly don't care if there are grammatical errors or if things don't make sense, because this story is one of the most beautiful things I've ever had the pleasure ...

    Feb 5, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it! I'll edit that line and fix the typo immediately. I hope you have a good ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    ah, thank you for taking the time to write such a useful review! I'll definitely keep the thing about my descriptions in mind for the next story I write.

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    I'm also glad you gave it a chance! Thank you for your kind words and I hope you have a good day (:

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    awww thank you so much!

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Cress (short story)

    this is was so good! I really wish it didn't end so soon, though ):

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    thank you so much for your review!

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    why thank you, good sir!

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: c h o i c e

    HAHA THANK YOUU! I guess I should work on some smoother thought transitions!

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thanks so much! means a lot (:

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thanks so much for the helpful review! I don't think I'll edit anything into the piece as of now, but I'll definitely remember those pointers for next time. Have a ...

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: in regards to heartbreak

    thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix those straight away. And as for the seventh house thing, it's actually a reference to the boy's birthday. A bit random and ...

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Losing Yesterday

    This is beautiful.

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: s t a t i c

    ah, thanks for pointing out that wording issue, I'll fix it right away. And as for the coin analogy, you're close! I didn't realise how vague it sounded until now, ...

    Jan 2, 2017


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