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Re: Little Pigs...
I love this take! Firstly, you're absolutely right about this being a bold approach, and about it resembling modern rap. I actually study rappers more than poets. Rap was originally ...
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Re: Little Pigs...
I love that you told me more about my poem than I had initially considered while writing it. I'm still learning this point system, but I will update my profile ...
Mar 3, 2025 -
Re: Little Pigs...
It's meant to represent racial issues in America, this poem is a part of a collection of poems all centered around race and politics that I'll be publishing on Amazon ...
Mar 3, 2025 -
Re: when i ate the mold - I
I am going to keep reading this all day now. I love some of the internal rhyme schemes, but I can't exactly point to what this poem is trying to ...
Mar 1, 2025 -
Re: all of our bones will turn to dust
This is beautiful! I felt like I was walking a tight rope myself while reading this. Every line was relatable, but still makes you think! And the end brought all ...
Mar 1, 2025
