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If I titled the poem "Lies", would that give the acrostic part away too easily? Thanks for your review; it was really helpful. You're right, it does need more imagery.

Formatting error; the dashes represent stanzas. Yeah, I know it's not all. Great commentary, and thanks for the review!

His name's Hospital. Thanks for the review; I'm glad you liked it.

Yep.

Definitely love the edits. This is an awesome poem; and part of that is because sunsets are such a relateable thing (at least to me). I get the exact same ...

Your welcome! Glad I could help! :)

Thanks for the review!

Kill people based on their lineage? When you put it that way, it almost reminds me of genocides. That's a great idea, blackwood; that makes it seem way more believable! ...

Thank you for the review! I'm actually thinking about cutting the sister out from the story; the original idea being that she was estranged from the two brothers because of ...

Thanks for the feedback! I kind of thought it was realistic simply because of the fact they're safeproofing everything. I can't see the story taking place on an alien planet, ...

Super helpful review; thanks!

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! : )

You're welcome. That's my goal in life; making people cry. JK.

You're welcome. That's my goal in life; making people cry. JK.

Thanks for the link! Yeah, the where oh where is growing on me too. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful though.