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Thanks for the comment and the like!

Thank you and welcome to YWS!! :)

Thanks for the comment and the like! :)

Thank you! :) And I like the butterfly in your avatar.

Thank you so much!!

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

I like this; but I wish it wasn't quite so fast, like I wish there was more details in the first two grades. I wish that they were a bit ...

Really, REALLY sorry guys about the formatting; for some reason it's not registering when I click enter, which is kind of important for a poem.

That's great! How do I find the next chapter?

This is an AMAZING poem! It really related to me. My favorite line/lines was/were: Remembering, rewriting, reminding. I think that sums up the poem really well. This poem may be ...

Okay. It's an interesting poem, but, for the first half, it's very interpretive (a bit difficult to understand, but not in a bad way) and then in the middle it ...

I tried seperating it into paragraphs, it wouldn't let me.

She isn't spastic, she's eccentric! There's a difference.

Oh, Allywa, what a wondrous review! You make me, not only a better writer, but a better person! Amazing suggestions, I shall apply a few and think deeply about a ...

Umm... keep it moving and make sure whoever wins wins by the skin of their teeth so to speak. And don't be afraid to injure your characters but be a ...