tgham99

Thank you as always for your insightful feedback

Hi!! Thanks for your review. The idea of the poem is to highlight the feeling of second-best/jealousy which is something that I personally have struggled with in the past. Thank ...

Thanks very much for your feedback!!

Hey there!! Thanks for your review

Thanks so much for your review!! I actually went ahead and made a few change based off of your suggestions so they were definitely helpful

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No problem, I can't wait to see more of your writing!!

You are too kind.. thank you very much for your review

It definitely is sad, and I wanted to really sum up the power that comes behind this specific type of realization. Thank you for your review

Thank you so much!! I'm glad I was able to convey emotion so powerfully because that's one of my more solid assets as a writer.

Thanks so much, you're too kind!!

Thank you so much for your review, it's always great to receive such detailed feedback/analysis of my work!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm also happy to see that ...

Thanks very much for your review -- I love that you went deeper into the potential interpretations of this poem. I really did try to encompass the fact that people ...

Thanks for the review! I actually intentionally left it shorter to remain more vague/less detailed to leave the reasons for her discontentment open to interpretation, but if I make a ...

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I'm glad you liked it :)