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wow this is great! You used great descriptive words like when he felt around for the water dish because he was parched. This is brilliant. It is like the life ...

I really like it! You used great description. I like the elements of China you put into your writing. I have a few questions for you though. How old is ...

This is realy good! I love the concept of how princess Yuki royalty and how she goes to school. I wish you put more explanation on how there demons, angels ...

This is really good! I exceptionally like the beginning. "I opened my eyes, dazed. Where was I?" I like the emotions you put into it. I love the name you ...

I was a little confused in the beginning how it was too late and how the doors closed. Were did the girl come from anyway? Do they know each other ...

This is really great! I love how you put in the details of everything that goes on in her life. How there was only one that loved her and that ...

This is super good. I love to people watch to so I can relate to t.j. I love how you put the detail of how she moved to the city ...