telle_04

Don't worry about the rest, it will take care of itself the best all you have to do is take flight. Simply beautiful. :)

wow, guys. thanks so much for the feedbacks. i greatly appreciated them. :)

hey guys. thanks so much for the help! actually, this is just a draft, but i posted it here so i can earn comments and hopefully edit it. i appreciated ...

No you don't, it's amazing. Every other thought roaming in your mind is another page of agony to someone. Never stop writing, and once you have the words rush to ...

ideas are all around us. :)

Good job! It conveyed a message, and I liked the characterization of the main character. My room is full of pictures, that they covered the walls, hiding the ugly pink ...

This was very sweet. I liked how you showed the mother's love through her actions, and not just by saying how much she loved. There were some tense issues, where ...

hey i think its great. Its angry and its blunt and to the point. I think it risky having some of the lines not rhyming but i love the parts ...

Hullo, Telle! I like this song! I'd like to know how it's intended to be sang/what music it's intended to be set to. Some of the lines carried on longer ...

hello carlito. thanks for the review. and i'm going to reply. Overall I thought this was really beautiful. I liked that you didn't follow a set rhyme scheme and I ...

hey, you're being active now. keep it up. `telle.

hello, firearris. i appreciated this. thanks for pointing this out, well..i'm not really done with editing, so mind my capitalization and punctuation. thanks again. `telle

wow.(takes a breath) this is COOL. as in cool, like, i haven't thought of putting things like homosexuality and deafness and high school life together. this is really AMAZING. i ...

hahaha.. i'm telle_04's brother. i'm a real SPOILER, and i will babble all what will happen in the story. just joking. i've read this since chapter 13 (the ORIGINAL manuscript). ...

Hey telle! what's up? So the story was really cute and charming. I liked the characters,how you states them. I really like how you began the story and your style ...