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Re: Heart Slap New postby Rock n' Roll Queen on Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:08 pm This is an amazing poem that I really connected to & I know other's ...

"t's a bit short and it would of been easier to read if it was broken into paragraphs. I couldn't get a feel of the song so it might be ...

Um, hmm... The idea of the song is interesting and a good message. But the lyrics I'm not too sure of. There's no rhyming scheme for the song and I ...

Re: My Day in the Sun New postby LiesOnLies on Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:46 am The Lyrics I thought this was a very wonderful positive song. However, one thing ...

You're really talented....Your usage of words is really good! While I was reading it I felt that there's a beat within the words. I just wanted to give u some ...

I'm an Egyptian n' I live in Egypt. I mean no harm but it's just I think you're wrong. Why are you saying sorry?! You're answer would be because you're ...

gr8 organization and wonderful choice of words....but there is a little thing that i have to say!!!The story you're telling isn't appealing that much,,,and also the song tittle ain't that....just ...