tacoguy1988

whoops ignore this

Thank you. ;_;

There are 10 characters and I know how they all look like. I think I want to create short version and a long version.

Thanks for showing me my mistakes. Its not complete. I have notes on what the. The themes are being ferociously anti-death, tradition, diplomacy, and culture. It will be more hammered ...

What did you think clouds were before? I liked the poem. I don't like how it sounds aloud when I read it, but it could be totally different when you ...

I don't like the last line. It doesn't flow with the rest of the poem. I like the rest of it though. Makes me wonder what is happening. He killed ...

>Whoah there... try and break up the text! It's really confusing and hard to read through... you need to space things apart. I think you read it as soon as ...

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