syzygy

I first thought of it based on the "would we still be siblings/lovers/enemies/etc in another universe?". It hit a little harder when I realized I've seen very little of "would ...

Actually, I'll just make a blog post. I think that'll be easier to edit anyways.

Ooh, that's true. I don't really mind spending the points, I acquired extra and have spare.

I've been thinking about making a race and character index as a completely separate chapter since there are so many, some that won't be included in this story but perhaps ...

Ah! That part describing the blood was supposed to say watery flower, then remove the flower mentioned a few words later. I'll fix that, I'm so bad at catching mistakes ...

Yep! The races are just because of all the cute features you can add in the lobbies.

Aww, don't worry, you can have an honorable mention in the next chapter ;D (Thank you, thank you! I thought it would be cute- and I like writing character death ...

Aww, I appreciate this review so much. I know how hard it is to find problems with poetry, especially freeform poetry (which is why I avoid reviewing it like the ...

Thank you for the review ^^ I did try to do colors but it simply wasn't working for me, so I stopped. Also, in your Blue/Loyalty section where you mention ...

It's alright!

OH. That makes sense. We have a point system. Reviews = points = posts. 200 per post.

Publishing Center -> Click on Draft -> Side Panel, click the button that says "Edit Work" -> Scroll down, hit Publish Draft. -> Scroll down yet again after adjusting settings ...

Oh! That's why. It's a draft haha, you have to click the post button.

You did? I don't see it yet :(

Thank you! I know the way I wrote it was... odd but I'm glad you stuck around long enough to enjoy it. I wrote it how I pictured the words ...