sylviaelioness

This is a beautiful poem. You make it sound like you're trying to convince yourself that your not depressed. You giving all these reasons, yet you still realize that something ...

Hi. First things first: I think this has great potential. It's an interesting idea, continuing off from the Raven with a vampire romance and all that. You definitely have something ...

First, to answer your question: I think it would be a great idea for you to continue this. You leave the reader hanging there wondering if he does actually survive. ...

Petra. Yes, it does do that to a person. Exhausts you and then right when you're about to give up... Bam! your overwhelmed with beauty. Your description of the walk ...