sylrie

Thank you so much! This was actually based off of an actual conversation I had with a friend of mine, so this is a poem that's very close to my ...

Thank you for the review! Honestly, as long as people are reading my stuff and liking it, I don't mind tired reviews; we're all tired, after all!

Thank you for the review! To explain a bit, the lines weren't really meant to tell one continuous story (The wolves, room, flasks, etc aren't connected as any sort of ...

Thank you for the input! Concerning the references to the future, well, those aren't references to the far future. In fact, that future occurred within this very chapter, but you're ...

Additionally I will be focusing on individual characters later on, as at some point doing so will be necessary.

Thank you for your input! There will indeed be more characterization later on, as this chapter was more meant to be an introduction of sorts (and to be quite honest, ...

Thank you for the input! I always did enjoy trying to imitate ancient folklore to a degree, and I like to take inspiration from writers like Margaret Weis. As for ...

Making Warrior Soul a pronoun was entirely intentional, as it is a habit of mine to do things like that. As for the rest, thank you!

Thank you! It was meant to be deep. I tend to write things like this when in a state of misery, because it helps with putting real emotions into a ...

When publishing something like this, I find it is better to simply publish first and worry later. My more impulsive decisions seem to be my best! (Though I would not ...

There were supposed to be stanza breaks, and indeed I tried putting them in (when looking at the draft, it appeared that I had been successful. Apparently I wasn't.) As ...

Beautifully written piece. The title prepares the reader for a sadder piece, before suddenly disaster strikes. The only question I can think of is concerning the choice of metaphors. Comparing ...