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Wow this is good. really good. this poem held me from start to finish. "A form of love so sublime, that grows in faith with the passing of time. A ...

This poem is a very nice piece. "Underpasses, ramps, and exits flicker by without a thought." It sounds to me that this person is depressed and driving to forget someone ...

This is really cool, I enjoyed reading this very much. I do not know the story very well but I assure you I will be reading after this. This looks ...

This is a really good dark piece. I like how you described the blood as "dark" and "sticky" it really makes a difference. This gives me a sad depressed feeling ...