sweetyami101

I was intrigued the whole way, but I didn't really get what you were trying to say. I still really liked it, so don't be discouraged. I know how it ...

I'm going to be honest at first I was confused and skeptical, but as the poem went on I think I started to understand it. If I'm at all right, ...

I loved the way you talked about how small the boy was in the beginning and then used that to make him being tall in the end so much more ...

You're ability to describe everything in this story was breathtaking! I felt like I could see the earth splitting and feel the villagers torment throughout the story. Bravo! The ending ...