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  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there

    OK, I can't review this because I can't find a thing wrong with this. It says everything it should say, and I love it, because at heart, I am very ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    That's OK, you did what I wanted by telling me what I could do to improve it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: There are Rumors That I Have Become a Haunted House.

    Is this done?

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    That's OK, you did what I wanted by telling me what I could do to improve it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    Thank you! I'm quite glad you enjoyed it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The song of the elements

    OK

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    One thing you should know, is that the girl killed herself. I thought I made that clear, but apparently I could do a better job. I will work on adding ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sweet girl, Sweet baby,

    I know, Cinderfoot. I know.

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    I understand, and thank you for your words, because this is my first try at poetry, and I'm not that good at it.

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    I will punish you by taking your book!

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Invisible

    Yes I did like it. It is very good.

    May 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    The only reason I put a prologue in here is because later on she will end up being the reason for many things in this story.Thank you for pointing out ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    Thanks. I really appreciate reviews like this. They help me to become a better writer, and also to make this story more likable. Yes, it is meant to be vague. ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    I know, and am glad it didn't cause you to dislike this book.

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    I know, and am glad it didn't cause you to dislike this book.

    May 15, 2014


Nobody wants to see the village of the happy people.
— Lew Hunter