summerlovee

It would be my absolute pleasure (:

How can you write such a beautiful piece where not one part is boring? I wonder and I want your talent so bad xD For anyone who didn't read this ...

The best, truely

This was so good (: I didn't any less than the one before :D

Hi, this was so good (: I loved your rhyming scheme and it flowed nicely so I would say job well done (:

There is going to be more right? There definitely should be (: One very big mistake I found use paragraphs its makes the readers very hard to read without paragraphs. ...

This story is so good (: I look forward to reading more of it hopefully soon !!!

I loved your first chapter and now i love this! Keep writing your chapters and then before you know it it will become a novel xD Keep writing!

Hey there! I liked your story very much and is excited to see it continue xD Keep writing the chapters (:

This is going to be a good book (: Can't wait!

This is incredible Although it was short it didn't seem rushed and it was just magnificent!! I would definitly say this was one of the best short shorties I've read ...

I love these chapters xD Im so hyped up to find out who her real mother is and why she is acting so weird (: Good work, keep writing this ...

This was so good !! The rhyming didn't sound forced at all and the poem flowed really good (: Good work !!

this was so good (: wait theres goin to be more chapters right? There better be !

This kinda made me think about what i thought of homeless people again xD This poems rhythm and flow was really good and i have nothing bad to say about ...