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Re: Untitled
This poem was amazing :D It has a very poetic feel and rhythm to it! Im not good at poems so... no useful comments, sorry :l But as a practicing ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Life is short… and sometimes a little crazy.
This poem is absolutely true in every way! I really liked it (: These were my favourites We are not defined by the color of our skin or hair, nor ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: White Coats
I could relate to this! I was in the hospital for my apendictics and my doctor was like are you in pain and I said yes and he didn't even ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Age is but an Emotion
This was such a beautiful poem (: I cuddle my teddy bear too when i feel weak and alone xD I often want to be young again, cry when you ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Headphones
i could totally relate to what you mean (: I absoultely love my earphones :D You just a lot of descriptive words and what you said (feelings) were spot on, ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Population One
Oh my gosh. This was like the best story ever :D I noticed how you said 1st chapter? So there's going to be more right? There should be!! I can't ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Don't You Love?
Hi, I loved your poem and you perfectly described a player xD I have no bad comments for this (: i really liked these 2 paragraphs You are the charmer ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Dumb Playa
haha Ive been across one of them before and ur poem is right (: In the end you wake up to reality well just one problem the rhyming seems a ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Dear People...
That was really good and painfully true to most :l I guess we're all a bunch of sheeps... I totally get what you mean, like sometimes i want to shake ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Everyday Companion
This was good, i got engaged really quickly (: i normally don't hand out negative comments and im not going to start now because this is really good! I suck ...
Feb 18, 2011
