summergrl13

Yeah! This is an awesome little poem!

Very descriptive and in so, it's rather strong but that makes it very elegant. I really enjoyed this peice. Keep up the awesome work!!!

I enjoyed it but I thought that it was a little too heavy and too dark (obviously it's supposed to be dark and heavy but it's a little too much). ...

It's a fun little poem but that's just it; it's little and too short for me.

Interesting. I like how unique it is but I think you can write more.

I like it! It's unique.=D.

I really don't like how often it swears. You should use less because that's really heavy swearing. Other than that it's great.

I love it!! I'm not an emotional person and I felt tears well up in my eyes!!