summergrl13

Thank you! Haha I'm glad you liked it so much :)

Awwww thank you! I did enjoy writing about her mouth as if the icicles were her teeth, it made me feel as if she may have a sinister side to ...

Thank you so much, that really helped!

Thanks! Your review actually helped quite a bit :P

Rereading what I said, I agree. I'll try to explain more of my emotions ) Thanks!

Thanks, will do :)

Thanks! It actually was my own personal experience, and I decided to write down what happened to get some closure. But thanks for the review :)

Thank you so much :D it really helps. And I wasn't sure if I should go with this as the first chapter, but the book has a lot of dream ...

Thanks :D

Hi Alex :) so, let me start out by saying this has a good start and it seems promising. So please don't take anything I say negatively, because I do ...

Okay, I just wanted to explain that I created a prologue in case there's any confusion, but it's on a different page so that would be why you didn't see ...

Yes, I know the beginning is a little cliche and kinda predictable, but I made it that way on purpose. The truth is, the guy isn't that 'shy' at all, ...

Haha! All I can say is that I loved it for it's randomness and that the randomness is so beautiful in this piece, as I be a randomness master (it ...

O my god!! I just read the first one too and these crack me up!! I don't have much crit so umm, yeah I like it:D! 0(o.o)0

Thanks, it means a lot to me that people are reading this, even if they don't critique. I just want people to realize that this stuff can happen so it's ...