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Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 1) Chocolate Bar
I think it's interesting and I'm gonna have to read the other chapters now;). Just reading it makes me think of chocolate so now my mouth is watering and I'm ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Romantic Short Story #19
This is amazing and it fills my heart with love for it whenever I read it! Don't cahnge anything about it, it's the perfect short love poem and it's absolutely ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
LOL!!! I loved it! Too funny! And judging from your Leopluridon thingy, you saw/ made the Charlie the Unicorn thing on youtube.com! I love that video! It rocks! "It's gonna ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Spilling
You would rhyme at some parts but it wasn't very consistent. Also, this line bugged me: I'm dropping downdown Don't you need just one 'down'? Or you could do, I'm ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: more please
In the beginning it talked about the person you were talking to, then it was talking about beer and then it was talking about not sharing a beer with someone ...
Mar 5, 2008