sudz_amigo

Hey! A few mistakes I could point out. It's been a while, I'm so nervous So many people i don't know surround me, staring at me like I'm a freak. ...

I like Twilight.In-fact I watched the movie just about half an hour ago but I wasn't insulted by your HILARIOUS script! Seriously, I loved it! ^^ Here goes..... a Gold ...

Hey..thanks for the review...and how come two of your poems in one post itself? Just asking! About the poems they were really good...I mean the feel behind really sounds like ...

Over all you have conveyed the m.c's(sorry I forgot the name!) emotions of excitement and genuine happiness on leaving middle school quite well,but I think you can polish the first ...

Heyy!!It's Tuesday and you haven't posted the next part yet! >_< Lol!Just kidding! As you might have noticed I'm a biggggggggg fan of your work because Ive been sort of ...

Heyy!!! Good going there! I just love how sardonically Ella looks down upon her family! The way you wrote it-just awesome! They did their duty and said all the things ...

Heyy..Welcome to YWS!I'm sure you will love it here!! Really loved how you did all this..but there is a rule on YWS that you have to review at least 2 ...

Heya!!Me here!! I wanted to review this thing right from chapter 1 but...i htought i'd do it later not in the middle of my exams,but on reading this chapter I ...

Wow!!Really amazing!Smashing!Superb!Fantastic! Did I mention I liked this story?!! What I really liked about your story was that you described to the readers what was happening next door and at ...

I know you'll never read this. I know that I'll probably never tell you . Nice beginning! Could it be that we are components to a cliche, running blind in ...

Heyy!nice poem!You've described the emotions pretty well!! I see a couple of mistakes though..I'm pointing them out,don't mind! A little(FEW) more sleepless nights and little(A FEW) more fright filled

Wow!What an awesome piece!You have a wonderful way of describing everything with a bit of irony and humor.What i really liked was the way you effortlessly managed to build the ...

To those it may concern: This is a religious poem please don’t let that be your basis for your critique ------------------------------------------- I am lost and more lonely then before He ...

hm...i agree with the sofi though your piece was quite cynical it conveyed what you thought with remarkable calrity!! it got me thinking about what love means to me and ...