subtleenigma19

Hey there! Your poem has a rather eye-catching name, and the poem itself is quite good really. The areas that need improvement are: The meaning of the poem. I believe ...

Hey there! The first that comes to mind to describe your story is... beautiful. I really liked the way you put those lyrics in between the lines. It gave your ...

Hey :3 Great poem, you've described it the feelings of the lovesick perfectly, and it's something most people can relate to. Another great thing is that you've put the feelings ...

Hello there! The plot of your story was rather unexpected; I didn't think the old man was going to die so soon at the hands of something so sinister. The ...

Hey! I like the fact that your story's about survivor's guilt- you've portrayed it very well. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but that's alright; nothing major. I ...