stygianmoon17

The descriptions are really good, really paint a picture, But it's a bit over-descriptive. I mean, I guess that was the point, but it's a lot of adjectives. Like, let's ...

Hey there :D Hope you're having a great day! I saw the title of this short and i just HAD to check it out On to the review! The beginning ...

Hi there, hope you're having a great day/ night/ afternoon/.. :D Off with a review! While a journal entry is a great idea to tackle murder mysteries, it's a bit ...

Hey there, good evening/afternoon/morning/.. I'm here for a short review :P Miles and miles of dryland surrounded us as the sunset. Smooth blues and citrus clouds hid behind the plateau. ...

Hey there, hope you're having a wonderful (insert time of day) :D Hmm for such a short short story, this has a lot to unpack THEORY 1: this guy is ...

Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D Just gotta say, the sort of synopsis of your story, is just GREAT I was immediately intrigued the moment i read it ...

Hey there, stygianmoon here for a review :D As a huge fan of horror, I just HAD to check this out :p Let's start with the negatives, I felt like ...

Hey there! Hope you're having a wonderful day :p Starting with the negatives, I felt like there were a few little illogical things here and there. It's really nit picking, ...

Hey there ! This is quite an old "work", if I can call it that haha, But I saw it in the green room, so let's pull it out from ...

Hey there ! Here with a review :D This was a really moving piece. I loved the way you presented this incredibly serious yet true topic. It's something not enough ...

Hey there ! Before I move on analysing this piece, I just saw your synopsis (?) The thing under the title, which says what your story is about. Ok so ...

Hey there ! Hope you're having a lovely day ! Or night ! Or afternoon ! Or whatever Okay wow ! This was quite a read ! Let's start with ...

Hey there, @BeingRivy, here for a review :) I think this story really holds up together, there's only this one thing that needs a bit more effort. Your characters. For ...

Hey there, hope you're having a great (insert time of day), here to drop a quick review :D Ooh the characters are extremely lovely, gacha really brought them to life ...

Hello there LizzyTyler, hope you're having a lovely (insert current time) Since this is something for school, I'll try organising this better, the first part will be about grammar mistakes ...