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A steffenate review: I just want to say that although I am new here, this is one of the best shorts I have read on YWS and it deserves more ...

A review from steffenate, A very hard hitting piece that compares an abusive relationship to a hanging. 'Jesus, my hair needs arranging' - This got to me because its a ...

Short steffenate review: Very beautifully written, I love the urgency closer to the end and the self-reflection. It felt so real that one would wonder whether its just a story ...

Steffenate here, here is my review. No issues with punctuation and the structure of the poem. From my analysis its pretty tongue in cheek and childlike, it reminds of a ...

Wow! What a cool concept. The idea that you're longing for someone and using specific diction like 'I hope you come back even if it is just to pick up ...

Very intriguing story with pockets of ambiguity which is always a plus. I can see some changes in tense as the story progresses. This needs a little cleaning up. I ...

My review of Darkness brings light: Pros: A detailed and expressive description of a nail-biting chase. I like the fact that the writing puts us in the shoes of the ...