starryknightt

What an incredible critique! Thank you so much for your suggestions.

Thank you!

Hey! Gosh, I really appreciate your review. Thank you so much for the kind words and suggestions.

Chapter two is up, my friend! Thank you so much!

Chapter two is up! Thank you so much :)

Chapter two is up!!! Thank you.

Okay, so, I'd just like to point out how cool it is that like five different people can read the same poem and picture something completely different. I did see ...

Oh my goodness! Thank you so much. I know the writing kinda sucks- I wrote this a couple of years ago and have progressed past this point. However, I'm just ...

Chapter two is up :) Not quite as mysterious as this one, but trust me it'll get there.

Chapter two is up :)

Thank you so so much! This really means a lot. I'll probably be posting more today, so I can't wait to hear what you think of it :)

Wow! Your complements mean so much! Thank you. I will definitely let you know when chapter two is out, and I can't wait for you to keep reading :)

Thank you for the kind words and suggestions! I will definitely keep them in mind. The folder is a great idea- I'll do that today. I'd love to hear what ...

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. I'd love to hear what you think about chapter one!

Lol, is this poem about me? Kidding. Kind of. This is pretty fun. Particularly related to the "PFFFFFFFFFFF". Great job haha. Can't wait to read more of your art! -M