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Re: Of uncles and nephews
Hey there! I saw you posted and decided to review :D If this is from some show, I am not familiar with it (just a heads up in case I ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 2: A Fate Worse Than Death
Hey there! This chapter seemed quite interesting, so I decided to check it out :D This is pretty well written! I can tell you put time in planning out your ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: The Night Witch - Chapter 3: Nadya (August 1950)
Hey there! I decided to check out this chapter of yours! :D One thing I noticed while reading is that you are really good at sticking with one tense! I ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: Glitter - Chapter 1
Hey there! The title of this novel caught my eye, so I decided to give it a review! :D Ooh, this chapter is a good start! The story between the ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter Four
Hey there! I decided to check out this chapter after reviewing your fifth one :D I love this chapter as well! Your writing is smooth and flows naturally. Your grammar ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Chapter Five
Hey there! I haven't read previous chapters, but I saw this in the Green Room and decided to review :D Ooh, this chapter was quite interesting! The first thing I ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: Since I have nothing else to do, I decided to take the Quest Book for Pass time
Hey there! Welcome to YWS :D If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask! Ooh, this chapter is long, but it's quite interesting! You seem to have a ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: For Gods Saké & Massacre of Some Goats (Tales of Yasuke 3 & 4)
Hey there! I haven't read the first part, but I wanted to help this out of the Green Room! :D This is definitely a cool concept! I can't say I ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 3)
Hey there! I'm back for another review to help this out of the Green Room :D Again, this chapter is really well written! I enjoy the dialogue and banter, and ...
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 2)
Hey there! I haven't read the previous chapter, but I decided to help get this out of the green room! This is really well written! You have a nice amount ...
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: Modern Witches of Toronto-Story 2: Quincy and the Ghost
Hey there! I haven't read Story One, but I saw this in the Green Room and decided to help it out :D This was quite the story! I like how ...
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: Truce?
Hey there! I really enjoy reviewing your stories, so I decided to review another! :D You have pretty good vocabulary and descriptions! Your dialogue also seems pretty natural and human. ...
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter Three - Red Eyes
Hey there! I haven't read the previous chapter, but I decided to review this to get it out of the Green Room! :D I like this chapter! Its filled with ...
Aug 6, 2020 -
Re: reset fate worse than death chapter 1
Hey there! Welcome to YWS :D I hope you're enjoying it so far! This novel seems to have a pretty interesting plot! Your title is definitely captivating, as is your ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: The heir
Hey there! :D Interesting story you've got here! I think you're mixing Harry Potter and those superhero dudes? Since I'm not very familiar with the latter, I won't critique on ...
Aug 4, 2020