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Re: The Plague
Hey there! Old, but has less than two reviews, so here I am! :D This piece is pretty cool! I like how you compare mankind to a "killer virus" (which ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 4: Eye for an Eye
Hey there! I remember reviewing one of your chapters, and I enjoyed it a lot, so I'm back for the next part! :D I'm going to point out things I ...
Aug 24, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 3.1)
Hi hi, I'm back for the next chapter! I'm loving the story so far, so let's just get right into this! :D Ooh, so we get to see Rowan's perspective ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.2)
Hey there! I am back for the next chapter and excited to see where this goes :D “Guildmaster Margaretta invited Isadora and I to accompany an expedition to one of ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: The Street Urchin
Hey there! Old, but has less than two reviews, so here I am :D I'm going to point out some grammar as well as other things and conclude with my ...
Aug 30, 2020 -
Re: Inevitable Outcome Part 02 : The Hospital
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to check it out :D Congrats on graduating from architecture school, that's really cool! I hope uploading these pieces ...
Aug 23, 2020 -
Re: Jimmy Fights Butterpants
Hey there, I'm back for another one of your stories! The title caught my eye xD I like how you jump right into the story. It definitely catches the reader's ...
Aug 28, 2020 -
Re: The girl from the library V2
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to check it out :D I'm going to start out with critiques and then I'll tell you what I ...
Aug 22, 2020 -
Re: Thinking out loud: The premiere
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and decided to check it out. I'll try not to be repetitive and mention something DavidFoxx already has, but if I ...
Aug 21, 2020 -
Re: colourful musings
Hey you! THIS IS AMAZING AHH. I was thinking of waiting till this was out of the Green Room to make sure you'd get a good review, but alliyah said ...
Aug 21, 2020 -
Re: The Phantom Pains (short story)
Hey there! This is old but has less than two reviews, so here I am! :D This should have a language rating on it, by the way, since there are ...
Aug 27, 2020 -
Re: Bony Fingers
Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and the title interested me, so I thought I'd check it out :D The world she lived in was a forgotten ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 4: Part 2)
Hey, I'm back for the next part! ^^ I like how in this chapter we got a lot of dialogue between characters. It wasn't too much or anything in my ...
Aug 19, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.1)
Hi hi! I'm loving the story so far, and I'm eager to read the next part :D Ember had just finished history lessons with Cassius. I don't really see the ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.2)
Hey there, I'm back for the next chapter! I'm excited to see where this goes :D Margaretta waved to the centre of the room, where four cushioned chairs standing on ...
Sep 2, 2020