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Re: I Will Chase the Wind.
Oh gosh this is beautiful!!! I love how it's sad but not in a self-pitying way, and then it gets hopeful at the end. I like when you said "just ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Circumvent
I love this, especially the last two lines. I think the second stanza was a lot stronger than the first and the first one can be developed a bit more. ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Mirrors and Webs
Oh wow I like this a lot! I like the images and language used, it really got inside my head and I can understand what you're trying to say. However, ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Silent Hands
I like this, I can feel the desperation and helplessness. I like the use of capitalization to get the point across. I do feel like you can express yourself more ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: Courage
Very nice! I like all the rhetorical questioning at the beginning, it got me involved in the piece. I do suggest that you go a bit more in depth, I ...
Jan 23, 2013