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This was incredibly amusing. It actually reminded me a lot of those Georgia Nicholson books (not just because I can tell you're British -- if I am wrong then... I'm ...

Hello! This was a really stunning short story. There were just a couple things I found that could use tweaking: The gravel crunched beneath the soles of my polished, black ...

Wow, what a powerful story! I really liked it, but there are some things I noticed that could use tweaking. Light rain droplets pattered on the dark pavement; each speck ...

Hello! This is kind of a trip to read -- I just graduated from high school actually. I think that there's a good foundation here, but there's room for expansion ...

This poem is so friggin great. It is great. I can see what annapapadimitriou123 was saying, but I seriously think that girls who wear those shorts are wearing them for ...

Wow, you're really quite a good writer, especially for a 14 year old! 14! There are some really good moments in this. I'm very drawn to this beautifully subtle little ...

Wow, well, first of all I was totally shocked by the ending! I definitely didn't see that coming, but it gives you a whole new perspective about the rest of ...

Hello there! Well, I think this is a good start, that gives you a good idea of who Roselle is and what she's about. This might sound a little contrary ...

Woah I didn't even know this was you who wrote the story, until I saw tapatia's comment :B Forreal I wouldn't mind some of James myself. Guh. Your description of ...

Hello, there :D I'm going to have to first disagree with the above reviewer about the first line. It is unconventional, but it grabbed my attention, and I really like ...

I lovelovelove the lilt to the lines in your poems, and the usage of vocabulary. The meaning of your word choice is important, of course, but the sound alone of ...

I actually liked Catching Fire better, for whatever reason. I honestly don't know why. But I thought it was terrific. I honestly wouldn't have guessed that they'd have to repeat ...

Okay, so I am confused a bit here. This feels a lot like its part of a larger piece, rather than a round piece of short fiction. There's nothing wrong ...

Hola there :D Oh, how I wished for him to be real... I would chuck this line. As some other people have said (so why am I saying this as ...

This is a really interesting idea you have here, and I love the opening. I just have a few bits of concrit. - I am too well acquainted with, along ...