spottedkit

they laugh i laugh with them their lines are familiar soon it's impossible to tell us apart The way this describes the experience of what it is like, to assimilate ...

Now were in debt. -- we're I noticed you capitalize every line, it looks better if you don't. There is also a few capitalization errors in each line, with 'Woulda', ...

Ania wiped the oil off her hands as she stepped back from the bellows. Great introduction :) It gives you a small impression of what she had been doing, and ...

It's interesting how you word this, it makes the reader think. It needs some punctuation, without it, it appears bare. Also, not capitalizing every new line would make it appear ...

Congratulations on being my first review! Catch me while you can, please. Dull world and people tease. The 3rd and 4th lines didn't quite make sense. Maybe 'where' instead of ...