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Re: Break threw.
Whoa, that's a nice poem, if you like that kind of poems, but i think you used nice vocabulary, and similies and other literary terms. i'm glad your getting better ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Where am I going?
Hmmm, sounds like he's not a very good boyfriend? Anyway, I liked it, the repetition was good, so was the way you described how you felt, very expressive. Keep writing. ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: How I Feel When I Play The Piano
Polish it up a bit, and its really good! I liked it cause i do the same thing in it. It was good because you were expressing yourself in a ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Suicide
It was depressing, sad, but super! How did you come up with that. you gotta tell me how to write like that. I love writing a reading poems. But your ...
Dec 5, 2008