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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Go Beyond

    The title is very nice and your essay is informative. Keep up the good work!

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Teen Fiction, General Re: What to Do?

    Your essay is very informative! Keep up the good work! :)

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenage Management

    Nice essay and it is really a convincing essay! Keep up the good work! :)

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll make you regret the day you gave up on me.-DAR

    A very emotional poetry and I really like it! Keep up the good job! :)

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: “Teenagers’ Attitude”

    Your thesis statement is nice and also the content of your essay but your title is cliché.

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Life is Different Especially when you’re a Teenager

    Sorry because the cluster catch my attention and I forgot that the title is located at the top. Sorry for that! :)

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Life is Different Especially when you’re a Teenager

    Attitude of a Teenagers is your title or just a cluster? I think that it is too cliché but the content of your essay is nice and you explained it ...

    Oct 5, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenager's Different Colors

    Your title is very interesting and I just notice like what glecile said, you should not start your essay with a quotation but the content is nice especially your thesis ...

    Oct 5, 2013


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