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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Renaissance Romance - Part I

    thank you for the review ! i chose a historical fiction because i got really interested in the renaissance lately, and i didn't mind doing research about it. and also ...

    Mar 29, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Misery Returns

    Thank you ! This is very encouraging !!

    Feb 18, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Misery Returns

    Thank you so much ! Your feedback is really helpful !

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shocking

    I just think this is really nice!

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: In the Dead of Night

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Misery Returns

    Thank you for the review!

    Feb 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: In the Dead of Night

    Thank you ! And yeah, sometimes by sentences can get a little wordy, but I'll take all of that into consideration ! Thanks.

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: In the Dead of Night

    Thank you for the advice ! I'll definitely think about adding a bit more to how Olivier says that line, because it does hold a lot of importance. My only ...

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: In the Dead of Night

    What I've been struggling with the most is naming things, as in I don't know how to name characters or how to title things. The names are mine and my ...

    Feb 8, 2021


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