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That is AWESOME. I especially like the whole "I can't see you, you can't see me" thing.

The way some people can tear it out of its place And leave it lying on the dirty carpet in disgrace. I LOVED that part. I love the whole song, ...

Hmm... I'll read it out loud and see if 'dirty' works. :D Thank you for your suggestions!

This is amazing. I had a friend once, with anorexia, and this is almost exactly how I felt to watch her suffer. Great job. :)

I love this story! You did an excellent job of writing from a girl's point of view. It's awesome! :D

I REALLY like the chorus. All of the lyrics all really good, though. I like the depth of it all.

I like it, it's very deep and emotional, especially for someone who doesn't usually write lyrics.