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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    :D Thank you. :D And why isn't anyone analyzing my poetry? No one mentioned anything about both the stanzas contradicting each other. -.- And I wanted both the stanzas to ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    Thanks so much. :)

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    Cigarette here is a metaphor for modernity. Not exactly penis. :)

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Day Dreams

    This is my blog post :P

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: If you're talking to the moon

    This was the most brilliant piece of absurdist literature I have ever read!

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Classroom Epicness

    It's got no purpose. It was just to assess my observation power. :D

    May 30, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    I wish Shakespeare wrote like this!

    May 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    thank you all the people who have helped to make my poem get featured! And i really wouldn't like the title to be changed, it will kill the soul of ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A dead man's last wish

    Aww thanks guys I never expected to get reviews on this after so long. This is one of my old poems. I write different types of poems now that are ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration...

    You misspelled the title. It should be inspiration not insparation.

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Red Brick Wall

    Thank you guys for your criticism. Actually I wrote this piece as a warm up exercise for writing my novel. That's why it's so rushed and vague. I think I ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Hmm thanks flower child but a poem isn't supposed to explain everything like a story. I have used many metaphors and I think people are getting horribly confused. Here is ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Silently Spoken

    And I like what you wrote, though I wouldn't say that it was 'flawless'. But I focus more on the idea and jest of stories and I liked what you ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Hey black bird thanks for the review! I have edited my poem but I haven't rhymed the last two lines as to me they are OK. And about those glittery ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Silently Spoken

    This is really nice you should continue writing. Definitely. I want to read more! Please!

    Jun 9, 2010


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault