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Re: The Cigarette In Her P****
:D Thank you. :D And why isn't anyone analyzing my poetry? No one mentioned anything about both the stanzas contradicting each other. -.- And I wanted both the stanzas to ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The Cigarette In Her P****
Thanks so much. :)
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The Cigarette In Her P****
Cigarette here is a metaphor for modernity. Not exactly penis. :)
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Day Dreams
This is my blog post :P
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
This was the most brilliant piece of absurdist literature I have ever read!
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Classroom Epicness
It's got no purpose. It was just to assess my observation power. :D
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
I wish Shakespeare wrote like this!
May 19, 2011 -
Re: That Sacred Slut
thank you all the people who have helped to make my poem get featured! And i really wouldn't like the title to be changed, it will kill the soul of ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: A dead man's last wish
Aww thanks guys I never expected to get reviews on this after so long. This is one of my old poems. I write different types of poems now that are ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration...
You misspelled the title. It should be inspiration not insparation.
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: The Red Brick Wall
Thank you guys for your criticism. Actually I wrote this piece as a warm up exercise for writing my novel. That's why it's so rushed and vague. I think I ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Flight Towards Freedom
Hmm thanks flower child but a poem isn't supposed to explain everything like a story. I have used many metaphors and I think people are getting horribly confused. Here is ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Silently Spoken
And I like what you wrote, though I wouldn't say that it was 'flawless'. But I focus more on the idea and jest of stories and I liked what you ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Flight Towards Freedom
Hey black bird thanks for the review! I have edited my poem but I haven't rhymed the last two lines as to me they are OK. And about those glittery ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Silently Spoken
This is really nice you should continue writing. Definitely. I want to read more! Please!
Jun 9, 2010
