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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    :D Thank you. :D And why isn't anyone analyzing my poetry? No one mentioned anything about both the stanzas contradicting each other. -.- And I wanted both the stanzas to ...

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    Thanks so much. :)

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Cigarette In Her P****

    Cigarette here is a metaphor for modernity. Not exactly penis. :)

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Day Dreams

    This is my blog post :P

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: If you're talking to the moon

    This was the most brilliant piece of absurdist literature I have ever read!

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Classroom Epicness

    It's got no purpose. It was just to assess my observation power. :D

    May 30, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    I wish Shakespeare wrote like this!

    May 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    thank you all the people who have helped to make my poem get featured! And i really wouldn't like the title to be changed, it will kill the soul of ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A dead man's last wish

    Aww thanks guys I never expected to get reviews on this after so long. This is one of my old poems. I write different types of poems now that are ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration...

    You misspelled the title. It should be inspiration not insparation.

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Red Brick Wall

    Thank you guys for your criticism. Actually I wrote this piece as a warm up exercise for writing my novel. That's why it's so rushed and vague. I think I ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Hmm thanks flower child but a poem isn't supposed to explain everything like a story. I have used many metaphors and I think people are getting horribly confused. Here is ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Silently Spoken

    And I like what you wrote, though I wouldn't say that it was 'flawless'. But I focus more on the idea and jest of stories and I liked what you ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Flight Towards Freedom

    Hey black bird thanks for the review! I have edited my poem but I haven't rhymed the last two lines as to me they are OK. And about those glittery ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Silently Spoken

    This is really nice you should continue writing. Definitely. I want to read more! Please!

    Jun 9, 2010


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