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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Islands

    This was a very short but meaningful poem. To be blunt-I loved it!:) The imagery was great, and although there were few words, I understood where you were going with ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Culture Re: Furnace

    This poem was really, as the other reviewers said, full of imagery. From the moment I started reading I knew what it looked like in my head. I disagree with ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: The Homofauna Project - Chapter 1

    Um, so yea wow. This is a really cool topic to work with, and I can think of many books that have sort of delved into something like this but ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Celestial Heroes - Prologue

    All of the input olivedreams gave you, I agree. I love stories that involve things like mythology. I am and was into the Percy Jackson series, and so the mythology ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: A Cat Named Felicity

    Um, yea, wow. In the story I'm writing, I just publish it one chapter at a time. So it's really incredible that you were patient and persistent enough to write ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Corre

    Wow. Just wow. This was incredibly thought-provoking and captivating at the same time. I agree with the critics below, but besides those it was PERFECT. I had learned somewhat about ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Half the Truth

    Wow, this story is very different in a very good way. I really enjoyed the ways it went. It was also very interesting how you put the thoughts of the ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Summary

    I agree. Publishing costs points, so just write your story (or chapter) and see what we think about it. "The victims were found with their faces gone. The victims have ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Eight

    I love your story. Honestly, I have not been a member for very long, but your story is by far one of the best that I have read. It kept ...

    Apr 24, 2015


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