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Sphealwithit here, happy review day. You really are good at describing. I love the detail in the poem. The language is smooth and lyrical and with a good mix of ...

Sphealwithit here, good morning. I was sort of confused by this poem. Don't get me wrong it really is good, I just didn't understand it at first. The way inwhich ...

Sphealwithit here, happy reviewing day I like the idea behind the poem. I especially like the end 'No nations no prisions' it is pretty eye catching. The begginig of the ...

Sphealwithit here, happy reviewing day to you I like the idea of a slice of life writing and you have really got something here. I like the characters way of ...

Sphealwithit here, happy reviewing day to you I don't usually like spooky things but poems I can deal with. I like the way you said 'He is the ghost' it ...

Spheawithit here... Happy reviewing day.. I like this poem. I get a hint from the use of paper girl that she isn't able to stand up for herself or lets ...

Hello, sphealwithithere, happy reviewing day to you I think that this piece belongs more at the beginning of a chapter more than a prologue. You need to add more descriptions ...

Hi spheal with it here, good morning. I like the plot line here, however there are a few things I noticed. Firstly, the pace of the story feels a bit ...

Hello, sphealwithit here, happy reviews for people. I love Fall Out Boy so i liked the story the minute that I read it. There are a few errors however like: ...

Hello, sphealwithit here, happy review filled day. Wow. That's a lot of writing you've done there. You definitely have a talent here. It seems mainly rushed and some of the ...

Hello, Sphealwithit here, happy day filled with reviewing. the poem is awesome, its based on a really good theme. The whole 'Goes where no one should' is a really good ...

Hello, Sphealwithit here, A happy reviewing day to you :) I like the idea behind the story, i'm currently studying psychology so this kinda thing interests me. You have forgotten ...

I really liked this chapter, his mom seems like a right you know what. You need to proof read your stuff before you post things. I think that the plot ...

Hi there, sphealwithit reviewing : I really like this story. I like how you described Lizzy's eyes: Lizzy's eyes were almost like a deep endless ocean, an ocean of never ...

This poem is really strong. It's really moving. The rhyme scheme is good along with the rythym. I like the: I drank last night, and I will drink tonight. I ...